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The elder one continues to slumber deep beneath the ruins of a once mighty kingdom. But he won''''t sleep forever.------As this is my first fiction i''''m writing let alone sharing, I would greatly appreciate any advice on how to improve the story itself or my writing. Statistics Overall Score .star-1970-overall-443d8bf0e3d743c8a15318cea628b88b:after{ width: 85.4925% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 32,045 Average Views : 1,885 Followers : 54 Favorites : 13 Ratings : 4 Pages : 93 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author