Quick break from the world building.

  First, THANK YOU for reading this far. Seriously. If you’ve made it through Chapter 25, I must be doing something right. This story’s been an insane ride to write, and I’m putting a lot of love (and late nights) into it.

  Here’s the deal: I already plan on making this a trilogy. But I want to make this the best story it can be. This means I need your feedback.

  If there’s a moment that made you laugh, roll your eyes, question my thinking, or say, Whoa, that’s cool, tell me. Or if you hit a slow spot, got confused, felt there was too much information or felt a character was off, I want to know that too.

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  Drop a comment, even just a sentence. What’s working? What’s not? Favorite character? Wild theories? Even a “Still here and enjoying it!” goes a long way.

  I already have another 20+ chapters written and I may have to slow down posting them. Without feedback, I’m not sure what you like most and what to improve on.

  Seriously, leave me a comment, a rating or favorite my book if you want the next 20 chapters posted sooner than later.

  Thanks for sticking with me and get ready, because some serious action is about to go down. (Spoiler - Mana monsters)

  T. L. Lewis